Redesign something

Making my first Warhammer 40k oc , a night lords oc. his name is Dmitroslav Strahović or short Dimitri

So this au is was at first just my take on underfell but I decide to make it a mix of Warhammer and underfell into a one au.

So let begin from the start

Many years ago there two races that existed. Human and monster. The monster kinda lived in a cruel time controlled by the human kind and ruled by greedy people into a man from the gladiator pits spoke of his ideal . His name was asgore. He began a revolution to free his city against their oppressors and thanks to one the most trusted person he knew that was Toriel and her faith this crusade was brought to life and so the city was freed. However he knew that humans would come to fight his people for this and will do it again and again and he decided that human kind must be terminated. Toriel was at first a bit against the idea of such extreme execution however considering how her people were treated against their will and knowing perhaps they could become worse she decides to accept his plan. And so asgore began to create his perfect army of faith, brotherhood and holy vengeance.

THE SPARTAN: the Spartan are pretty much the space marine of this au. Crafted and designed by WD Gaster they are modified monster with stronger body and multi magic organs allowing them to become a fuck you walking rank to anything that it sees in mater of seconds and such upgrades is having one monster soul and two artificial human soul being bravery and determination. They were made to be shock trooper to the human kind and behemoth to whatever they fight against. They are different power armours just like 40k but there only two that were made. The crusade pattern which was made during the human extermination and the heaven crusade. This power armour were designed like old tank, heavy and slow but good at keeping you safe and making sure that the enemy is nothing but a soup as soon as you walk at their position. In other words is more a defensive. The other one was called golem pattern armour. This power suit was designed by alphy using the old blueprint of Gaster old design she decides to create a new suit for new marines. This pattern armour is a more modern version of the old one. More slim and faster. However it loses it more durability for more personalized tactics. In other words this two are similar to the first born armour and primaries armour from 40k.

there are other fighting forces in the monster kingdom but they more just similar to the 40k imperial so I'm not going to write them and just focus on the story.

The human extermination: during this event many things happen. Asgore was able to get his kingdom together as one. He began his creation in his perfect killing machines and also got official married to Toriel and raised their son asriel.

Once the Spartan were ready made and for battle the crusade shifted at max. The monster kind were butchering human kind in a light of speed to the point it grew globally. Battle after battle Tori noticed the crack of asgore but she couldn't tell what was causing it. Was it his hatred against human kind or was it something else. She would asked him until the earth was invaded by heaven. They declared that both races were corrupt and so they decided to kill them both. The heaven war lasted for seven days and was a massacre for both sides. The monster kind lost many of their people and also kingdom and the only that was left was underground. The humans were almost wiped out completely if it wasn't for the aid if monster kind. Asgore and asriel (who's a full grown adult at this time) join his father in fighting even tho both his parents said no. They both fought the leader of the angel but figured out that it wasn't one but instead a demon and that they all revealed themselves and killed asriel. Which lead asgore in a berserk rage killing the demon lord but being severely wounded. He decided to evacuated everyone including humans back to the remaining city that was in the underground and activated the golden throne room protocol however it required him to sacrifice his body in order to put it online and so the survivors were trapped inside the kingdom. And the demon couldn't get inside but they owned the outside of the world for themselves. During that day and forward nothing has been the same. Toriel during that day felt grief for the lost of her son, her husband and many peoples that died, she felt understanding in humans now how much similar they were to her people. And felt self guilt and betrayal towards her husband for allowing this to go to this level. Knowing that her people despite humans but knew that they were here under the orders of the king they decided to put them in the ruins with and Toriel went with them , not wanting to be part of the kingdom anymore.

As years go by. The kingdom has grimered . Asgore has become nothing but a corpse, keeping himself alive through the unholy agony to keep his people safe from the demons outside with his omnipresent. The monster kind has been split into factions, villages, gangs and more. However asgore Spartans still remains. Serving as his final legacy and law. They try to keep people safe.

For in the grim dark future we must stay determined for the tomorrow!

For that is the only thing we can do.

Now is time write the individual characters and their lore. However some aren't made and only a view are

TORIEL

Toriel in the present day is the ruins takecarer. She's responsible for making sure that everything runs smoothly and also the well being of human kind and monster kind that lives there. She also allows none to leave the ruins because of the rules that were said and also she doesn't trust what happened outside and she does leave the place if she needs supply or help for them.

SANS AND PAPYRUS

Sans was born during the human extermination time and he , his brother and mother were the only survivors of their village getting burned by humans. Gerson was one of the person that went there to safe the place,well at least what he could safe. And he brought the survivors back to the kingdom, sans bad his brother wanted to joined Gerson in battle in order to help the other people like them and so they were put in a trial to become a Spartan which was a harsh one and sans almost died to become one but they survived and joined the battle. At first there was a feeling of duty and glory but as time passes it started to grind his mind and mentally more and more to all that feelings were gone and he just became numb by it, however papyrus even after becoming more rough and grumpy he still had optimistic and feeling that we need to keep going for the people we love and because of that sans keep fighting despite how much he doesn't want to because his brother is right. After the crusade and the lockdown sans became a guardian of snowdin making sure that his place is safe. He also tells jokes to the new Spartan members and the old stories of his brothers and friends. As for papyrus he basically now a chaplain to the whole legion and is second in command and having a friendly rivalry with undyen to who's better than the other.

UNDYEN

Undyen was born during the human execution time in the same village that sans and his brother were. She was only survivor of her family and she grew to be rebellious and determined. She wanted to proof her strength that she was the best soldier and she would do that be sneaking in the asgore cassette to challenge him. Now Asgore find her attempt amusing but also fascinating because how she got here without getting caught and how many time she fought him again and again despite multiple failures. And so asgore took her as it own child and train her to be the best. She was in fact the who pushed asriel to learn to fight and became true siblings with eachother. As you can goes when her new family was separated, when asriel died and asgore, she felt until a kinda a of self loathing and depression but through time she got better thanks to her friends and the brotherhood bond she had with the Spartan. In the present day she's the leader of the military.

There are more characters I need to write and design so I'm just going too put some basic stuff for one of characters that I have a basic idea of what to do with them

METTATON

With mettaton I had a idea of what if they were a rogue experiment of alphys and decided to create a gladiator pit gang where people would fight for a freedom that they wouldn't never get. Kinda very similar to overlord in idw in graraus 9.

He would look similar to tarn in design. And through it you see how cracked open the kingdom is.

So that what I have written so far. I will most likely make a comic with this when I learn to make one.

i have been trying to get motivation to work on this plus taking my time so I do it right

Making a successor chapter of the angry marines called Balkans pride. Will finish the art tomorrow

I don't feel confident to post this as art so I'm just gonna post it as news.

I don't think I ever posted Grimvict new lore that have been making through the last year so here it is the summary of it.

Alright Grimvict lore update. Real name victor grimmer. He was s former soldier of military fighting an alien invasion that was part of visitor race. After that horrible experience he decided to return to the farm where he grew up and help his brother named Oliver whenever he visited the city and also babysit his nephew Cassandra when her parents are busy with work. During one of this time visit the city his brother neighbourhood was raided by mafia mobs and their leader don CONVICT (the human version). One of the attackers entered the home and was able to kill Oliver with a knife. At that moment victor grabbed the weapon and blasted every single mob in the place except for convict who run away. He would chased him for months till he was caught in ambush and was torture and put into a electric chair by convict's hired criminals.

His corpse where found by a unknown organisation and was experimented with convict shapeshifting DNA and also visitor. They planned to clone him after the experiment so they could create a army and sell it to the corrupt rich people however what happened was that victor broke out of his tube cell and blaze everything and everyone in fire and carnage. To do this Grimvict felt nothing but misery, hatred and rage, he looked at the tag he was given and renamed himself Grimvict. Through that night he learned that the so called heroes of Newgrounds were just murders, and those he with his distorted mind and mortality by the experiment his body endure, saw himself as god chosen one as the one to purge all this evil powers down and would after go to find convict to finish what he started years ago .

Here some fun fact as well:

He hates his shapeshift ability, he sees them as a coward weapons and only uses them to turn his limbs to weapons or shift his body into some brutal animal or something alike. He needs to consume someone DNA in order to turn into someone or use their abilities and becoming physically stronger and stronger. He also requires to consume blood since his shapeshifting powers burns his body up and thus blood is used as cool off mechanism. He has a fraction of his humanity still, he always makes sure that he targets people that can fight or that challenge him and sometimes shows mercy if someone has earned it in a battle.

I have some storyline planned once I finalise his fight against convict .

Also here is a cool art made by @Myen34 months ago . I LOVE HOW SHE MAKES HIM INTO SILLY HUGGABLE MAN DESPITE WHAT HE IS AND STILL MAKES IT WORK 😭. MYENING YOUR A REAL ONE

I'm switching to pc. Drawing on phone may give me better control when it comes to drawing and all that. But the screen is small plus it running out of space.

Pain

Here is a WIP as well